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Haoge: San Tong Hello, this year's college entrance essay on the subject of critical articles sent out just two days to get a response is not small, Sohu blog page Recommend, causing great Debate. It can be seen, the college entrance examination, education, the general public of these issues are really very concerned about. The purpose of our discussion and criticism is also a responsibility and we expect our education better and better.
St Children: Indeed. I think this is a very good sign, that we are in the interest of public education, but also about our public expectations of responsible education. Of course, this also reflects our education together with the existence of the problem has been made public to the guilt and shame are the future. topics: educators, you really wronged Why?
Haoge: Indeed, education, the nation forward, a pivotal position of education. However, the feedback obtained directly from the article and other who discussed the subject of this essay to speak of view, was that , especially on the effective implementation of quality education significantly. Education reform has been carried out. We should be more education, advice, Weapon. Also how do you think we feel wronged to criticism?
St Children: Tolerance is a virtue However, the virtues of tolerance, embodied in the treatment of individual aspects of the matter is absolutely not tolerated. Otherwise, the error would have been down. This is the first point I wish to emphasize.
educator is not really ;, how to understanding. But this is not the issue we discuss today, so we do not say it.
we now say the least, if China is really to educators, then their efforts are not only social identity, instead they will be misleading the children because of their efforts in the wrong direction, in the opposite direction to educate students, it is not more to teach the more bad? This is not misleading what is it? education of what We do not have to look at what educators do, just go and see all clear to the learned.
and most importantly, education for farmers in the spring as planting was delayed when you sow it, it to harvest in one year to reward you. education and even more serious than farming, you wasted his years, he has to reward your generation. so we always say that people engaged in education, the responsibility of the invaluable education. For a child to said that our education will really determine their lives, and this is difficult to restore educational outcomes. So, in essence, the behavior of education has a strong non-recovery (we see this issue of universality).
education is not personal wish, as long as you stand on this position, you have to hit home a high degree of responsibility. because your face is life, faced with the need for national prosperity, faced with the requirements of national progress. Therefore, I always think that , engaged in education of people into their jobs, when the people swear, swear to God, if you do not fulfill their duties, you will get the roost!
only people who dared to send such a serious oath, we to believe that he / she will work wholeheartedly towards this.
often before I go abroad to Tianjin Children's Welfare Institute shoot film. the president of the orphanage called Feng Liwei (female). She was the selection of teachers welfare has never been very strict, she said to me: If you do not love children, do not come to this job, because this work is to love their children to basis. This is not something one half-day, but over many years to do. < br> If you enter the orphanage building, you really will feel their love, even if it is a corner, can show their true love. This example although some special, but the truth is the same. Child Welfare yard teacher to a large extent is the child's parents and relatives. ordinary school teachers at least the children's friends to do it?
the responsibility of education can not forced out of job responsibility. Education of care responsibilities the conscience of educators. It is ethical to control the.
topic two: education, are just to college entrance examination is still the top priority, education, college entrance or baton. it seems that people have such a misconception that the purpose of basic education is to the college entrance examination. So, the entrance will become a top priority for people across the country. You think that this problem Where are the causes? Entrance Examination cry for many years, but have to admit that China has its own national conditions, in such a big country to organize a regional population of the world's largest exam, it should be said is not easy. In addition to the college entrance examination has not find other more viable form.
San Tong: This phenomenon is certainly not one half, one or two years, formed a decade or two. In the previous criticism, I've said, the formation of the problem It has a historic, very deep-rooted, that is, the distribution of the feudal culture of thought. This is a very complex issue, a few words here can not say finished, but I can try to give an example. < br> Imperial feudal society What is the purpose? to government officials, and to the promotion, to a man is nine ancestral heaven. it is definitely not for education, if we think about it, even if you can find ; bribery, promotion, but to gain a deeper receiving educational opportunities, and accept the purpose of education is to learn to better contribute to society, learn to create, and learn to serve the community. At least this should be the motivation for our country's overall education. However, the feudal vestiges of the imperial thinking too deep, the entrance of modern society, will soon be such a bad idea to edification. and if people think that my words were too much, then we can look at a phenomenon, it is not also re-use college entrance examination what test vestiges of continuity. This is definitely not our original intention and purpose of the national higher education. but simply because of the implementation of education policy at the national implementation of those mistakes caused this error in the form of entrance examination process but also play a role in fueling.
If anyone still think that my words extreme, then we look at higher education admitted to higher education after the essence is how.
graduate students into the community will find a problem, we studied the knowledge There are many no longer do not have access, and some formulas used solely for the purpose but the clearance, the actual work never use.
author undergraduate four-year graduation thesis is completely learned in four years not relevant, and finally, the teacher selected to complete the work and the reality is very close to a paper entitled, I had to go through two months to re-engage a new discipline, and in reply to the whole A results ( 9 teachers are given the results) to get the two graduation class A-one. and very embarrassing that the author is the author four years of achievement in class is always in the last few levels.
This example illustrates what? is not to say how my own, but rather that the establishment of our university programs have simply mindless. divorced from social needs. I had a paper problem is an accident from the factory, I just want to give the accident reasons, or my thesis to be the conclusion of the accident. This topic is too fresh, too practical value, and learned in four years with me completely different things, in order to solve this problem, I have to take the books Museum looking for knowledge.
This gave me a lot of stimulation, let me at that time to set up on the course of university education have been questioned. how is it today?
I think, Mr. Yau criticism of Peking University, referring to the same problem, our education is not to impart specific knowledge to the educated, but let them quickly and directly with the social practice and a direct contribution to society.
can very extreme to say that we learn the knowledge, if not the development of society, then the knowledge is useless to learn from their country's education is a waste of money, a waste of student life, distorting the direction of our education.
Useful knowledge is good, useless facts and refuse no difference. We do not still hold that the old knowledge had been eliminated a scholarship.
now look back and say high school education. It is because we this is a state of higher education, thus making secondary education immediately just like in the past.
I noticed that some people criticized me a feedback on those who abuse this by the fact that knowledge to Hunfan spam to eat. They even direct view of the feudal imperial examination, that the selection of talent.
In fact, they did not have a problem clearly, is the examiner's examination examination, we have to compete for college entrance examination is to enable students to continue training for higher education opportunities. Therefore, no matter what the college entrance examination is not the point of view is the examination.
topic three: a composition test or exam writing?
Hao Ge: Oh, I think the examination provided for private children a level playing field opportunity, but then to restrict the system is no doubt the opposite of social development, particularly stereotyped thinking of taking limits of restricted persons, so Mr. Lu Xun's novel take on the stereotyped criticism disabilities. Back on the exam topic, the discussion on the college entrance examination basically focused on this issue in the composition. In fact, now people are questioning the question, what is college entrance essay in the end of the test? is a test or exam the students writing and thinking their way of thinking? or or other? In your opinion , entrance examination is the student composition what capacity? I have been thinking, if this writer Tie Ning to write entrance essay if you can get a high score you do?
St Children: composition and writing are completely different two concepts.
expression of composition needed is accurate, clear logic, and in the process the surface of their true views. This is the education of middle school students writing the requirement for writing the most basic but most important application of the requirements . If our students in the educational requirements for training them in what writing ability, it must be misleading and destruction. Finally, talented people are not trained, but Yamiaozhuchang destroy the children. essay examinations as students of a is limited to the. within the prescribed time limit, express your views and your ability to control the logic of the subject, the exam is not test talent, but simply thinking ability of students and test their ideas, they look at society and life value orientation.
writing is different, it means the needle is literary or artistic aspects of writing. Only now, we will ask their talent. because it is art, so the need to create; because it is created, you must have talent. This process is not so limited you, and of a people, an hour demonstrated ability to improvise is definitely not talented, but the experience accumulated from their experiences. writing need inspiration, writing study is not the inspiration for the students.
I would like to know the difference between educated people can fully understand. people who know how to write fully understand their writing is not writing the text.
We must be clear that our test objects are high school students . Based on this fact, we must also very clear that we are not selected through this essay that the students writing a high level. Although writers may appear in these, but our entrance is definitely not in the selection of writers. So Our essay writing tend to be the focus of students to think the problems and their value judgments on the objective study of things up, but also to clear their essay topic by the process of resolving their thoughts and find the distance between social needs.
(in my opinion, research and education in China who can put the country's college entrance essay as their survey to study how much this is a is the subject of how our composition out of the question.)
but our college entrance essay is what kind of a question motives? Let us look at this year's road essay:
have good people in the found a small sea turtles crawl from the sand Xueliwangchu, then came an eagle grasping a small turtles, small turtles to escort visitors to the sea, the eagle off. Xueli when a group of sea turtles crawl out from the sand, climb to the sea, the little turtle is the original investigation (police) force. and so good-hearted people left, right to a group of eagles. According to the statements, since the intended subject matter.
then we look at this applause of the education how those who look at this topic:
【Comment】 Volume 2, 2008, the National Language, Writing, from the contents, material composition chosen a candidate is no stranger to many of the stories. From the formal point of view, the two continued 2006,2007 The composition of way - material composition, is still subject to the material does not give, within the autonomous determination of the material point of view, conception, style, characterized by the title, so that moderation is difficult. This proposition not only has a certain openness and has certain limitations. conception is open to thinking on the material point of view are varied, but the material is on the conception of the scope of a prescriptive requirement. < br> This style of questions that candidates can start comparing ability to select the capacity and ability to explore, examine the candidates and then choose the angle to determine the ability of conception, making the candidates in the emotion, talent and personality.
to the material point of view, the perspective of composition is diverse, from the from the Obviously, this teacher's comments to us that the motivation of a Chinese college entrance examination: moderation.
and this time also > ; these words also tell us directly, this essay did not conception, what you see is what conception conception, then if you are wrong horse, you're in trouble. But this essay was surprisingly then, It is to let you go the eye. The farther you go, the more you have a skill, the more you'll fantasize, the more talented. (a question for the teacher, you're so talented!)
the topic and who According to the teacher of motivation, it really is to break apart the brains of students, then crumple the of:
this proposition will compare the candidates can start the discovery of capacity, capability and ability to explore options, and then test of the candidates choice of angle, to determine the ability of conception, making the candidates in the Her school of fantasy.
If educators in accordance with the understanding that the writer completely trained by the school, and to train teachers in the writer what kind of teacher? I think, if they are not writers themselves, they simply have Training does not come out writer. and writer is not that culture. So, thinking that the students and guide them to the values of education was hit by the formation of secondary education are mistaken in culture writer.
However, the questions were Perhaps their brains did not move so much, but the then the material would not give any conception of the direction of the induction, you need this material is very objective. But in fact, this ; small turtle, Comparison essay truly independent candidates can make conception, so that talented candidates filling, individuation.
However, these really can be a conception of social value in the conception it? snake oil of the conception is of no value to speak of .
is more purposive, or let you 0 reasons for contracting it is beside the point. This is the first point.
to get foreign countries if the composition of this evaluation, estimated to have low scores, even more than 0 but also the frightening thing is, it is possible for him / her misdeeds of the last recorded acts, sentenced the plagiarism.
full text of about 1,200 words, get rid of the so-called knowledge of history list 480 words, 720 words in the rest of the text and reproduction of material accounts for 220 characters, and then remove one end of the mm in front of all of this at the end of the paper are corrupt, it is put in front of the facts as a hypothetical, rather than arguments mm left entirely, only 420 students writing their own words. and this is a serious lack of 420 character details The lack of analysis of the complete lack of logic of things listed.
especially the essay topic to do with the title of a time adverbial, for argumentative speaking, very clear in the end you say? essay by unspeakable The reason is that the composition of people do not know what to write.
I really do not see where this article to show the personal characteristics of students. which part belongs to him / her?
and this is what I said, a student in a foreign country is likely to be included in the list of actors misdeeds. The concept of Jing Ke, the evaluation of Wang Zhaojun, are history books on the your own point of view. The act of Wang Zhaojun camp really got the country's stability? If she does not make such a sacrifice, her life then what is it?
emotionally, throughout the essay is too hypocritical, bluff, lack of rational analysis. In fact, we know that it is to write the expense, but it seems too good feel. But why sacrifice? for whom to sacrifice it did not clear the problem. Why do some people willing to sacrifice, the motives of this sacrifice? Why do some people to give and what the power of this devotion?
Finally, I want to say is, writing in the behavior of a small sea turtle demonstrated with the text of the Chinese historical figures who simply are not comparable between. or that he / she stray from the fundamental reason is that he / she did not go to a good analysis of the given material.
turtles of the , it can not pass the signal back, is not dangerous, is not safe. It is because people join, the family makes the tragic fate of sea turtles. This process is not emphasized at the expense of small turtles act as it is not emphasized at the expense losses. the material outside of the center is a small turtle was Eagle made a theme to get ridiculed, it became a joke. So, what is the theme of this story? theme is people face such as small turtles and birds of prey eagles ridicule attitude. who should or should not have this attitude? This so we should be determined from conception. This conception is the people themselves, is to give people the issues raised, the problem with mock turtles and eagle is no essential relationship. So I said, this essay gives the so-called material fact can not selective, only one conception is accurate and correct. That is the end of the original phrase, when people try to be smart, everything could go in the opposite.
and the words have just learned out of this essay question: The You try to be smart, leading to the opposite!
the author of this essay, I just want this next assertion, if this speculation does not change the way your writing is nothing. You do not have to show your talent mm if you have if you pretended to mm the content is not for you, you hypocritical mm your feelings is not real, that also can not get rid of people, the lack of real emotion mm I guess what your true feelings, you mm no thought your mind is thinking of your teacher, your head full of other people's things. You are a child to be destroyed!
In that article, critics reply, I also saw a users are given a Wang Shi.
In fact, both the wolf or the Wang's has long been misunderstood in two words, wisdom, and clever.
which is two values. with the concept of physics to analyze them inside, wisdom comes as vector, but also the direction in size; wise can only be scalar, only the size of the without direction.
a wise man can do very bad things to, like Hitler; wisdom always perform good deeds, such as Buddha, Jesus and so on.
Here is this essay, we provide to you.
National Language II synchronous write Pham Van essay: When survival time
as the waves gently took to the beach again, when the sea turtles call again when returned to her arms, sea turtles were again drilled in fear Sand Point, in front of them, is a full of hope and dangerous road, may be a bright future, it may be cruel end. survival times, always in a dilemma, this time, a weak but very strong small turtles, points out, shoulders the hope and mission of the entire population, although this may be the last one do not, and do not cares whether it is because the final relief that well-intentioned people failed to live up to expectations, at least at this moment, it small of my back under the sunset is so majestic and solemn.
looking at the turtles leave the back, time seems to back thousands of years ago, the beach seems to have rolled the waves, like the Yi River next to the Prince Dan personally to be the Jing Ke Ci Qin farewell poured the wine. this moment, the birds are worth wandering; this moment, the warrior whom also tears; this moment, why should they care about the hero's success and failure. sad, do not necessarily need too many tears; moved, do not necessarily need a lot of rhetoric. Perhaps he did not save the country in danger, but his moment of survival, he points out, the expense of the ego, the achievements of the righteous cause.
; a station connected to the purple Shuomo, left alone Tomb to the evening. Wang Zhaojun's name is, however, as Jing Ke, to stay on top in the annals of history, she is weak in the three cardinal guides and the five permanent members of the era, such as wilderness in her soft grass, but she was also tough as grass-like . campaign, people were always admire brave enemy general; peace in years, she always had been forgotten. However, the survival time, but she points out, stopped the Huns thousand armed and Kazuma, Han stopped spear and javelin. To keep the people hungry and cold, she walked into the cold and desolation of a people beyond the Great Wall; to prevent people wives and children, she has to bear the pain and separation from parents, and went to the foreign country. She , with her weak footer, to straighten the backbone of the nation, end the bloody killings, to avoid the loss of life. Even after her death for a long time, she still turned into an angel of peace, protect the thousands of Chinese people suffering from war.
Chinese nation has a long history of this nation, destined to inevitably rise and fall with honor; of the Chinese nation, this nation has always been indomitable, destined in the survival time, never missing even for national blood fallen heroes. whether it is winter snowstorm swept across half of China, or just happened to dump the power of the whole country, affecting the descendants of each earthquake, there is always so much courage to sacrifice, the courage to sacrifice the people to come forward. both in The first line of the earthquake, marching ruins and broken walls, to the darkness to bring light and hope for the people of the armed police officers and men; or holding a collection box in the streets of the city of love volunteers to pass; or in the countless love carries and care of roads, railway to transport the relief supplies, a few days and nights did not sleep for drivers; or burn the midnight oil in the factory, rushing tents, food, daily necessities and so workers; again or the whole nation, through the a variety of ways, expressing their concern for the affected areas and love to all people. Perhaps we do not know their names; perhaps, no one knows how the story has them. But no matter who, to hear this story will feel that it is these quiet dedication and silent sacrifice of people before the nation and national survival time, turn the tide, against all odds, and this spirit is said of a clock.
no one can live forever, no one nation can always is good weather, peace and prosperity. However, as long as each of us all have the courage to sacrifice such a belief, such a brave spirit of sacrifice, then even if the future we face another big storm, we can say that the soul of our nation still, the everlasting soul of our nation!
topic four: how the extraterritorial essay exam?
Haoge: China's college entrance examination from 1977 to the present, has gone through 31 years in a row. all these years of college entrance essay seems to have been looking for a way out, but the situation will arise often. According to your understanding of the extraterritorial college entrance examination, they usually write about how out of it? can you do for us to make a comparison?
holy child: 30 years is a concept ? is a country in another country lagging behind the longest time, even if you go backward, but also behind the 30-year knowledge of .30 years ago, we also teach the students, we are equal to 30 years behind the others.
now What is the age of globalization, technology allows us a message within a few seconds, generally around the world. Wenchuan earthquake, more domestic than the people I have to first know, because I was the earthquake in the Southern Hemisphere online although I, but I immediately understand the network in China's affairs. And when I called back, the domestic earthquake many of my friends do not know. What does that indicate? that 30 years is too long.
If our educational message behind this rate, we can create what? our knowledge will always be family, how many years ago. This is the institutions of higher education Yau has accused China of course content the reason behind the advanced countries.
our education who are on their own knowledge of that point to continue to bread where obsolete or to be eliminated, the development of newer and more advanced information?
31 times that sum up the entrance in the direction of the college entrance essay. In the back I will be attached to those interested in the person of such college entrance essay from 1977 to 2006, the college entrance essay. look at our what is taking the college entrance examination in the end China and Singapore college entrance essay about the subject. This information comes from the right, a Sina blog. (
According to the Bo-lovers say that this question is a 2007 essay in Singapore A level examination papers, Commonwealth countries is the equivalent of a college entrance exam, passed the A level examination, the results can be recognized within the Commonwealth countries (study permit).
and friends of the blog text into 12 topics (in English) and Chinese translation is as follows:
science encourages doubt; religion quells it the most serious threats the world has ever seen in recent years, comment (in recent years, China's rise is the greatest threat to the world, please comment.)
philosophy only ask questions without answering them, why study philosophy then? (philosophy is and does not answer the question, why learn it?)
studying overseas is an over-rated experience. what is your opinion? (Studying abroad is an overrated experience, what do you think?)
reading fantasy books is a form of escapism and nothing more. do you agree? (reading fiction is an escape of reality, without addition of any other meaning, you agree with?)
how will global warimg change the face of politics in the near future? (global warming might affect the future political?)
do foreigners bring more problems than benefits to your country (your country of foreigners for the problems brought about more benefits than they?)
is work-life balance a realist ...
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